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Sins Repaid With Death -5-

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Scarlet liquid stains the floor,
There is room for so much more
Flickering flames dance around,
As the house falls to the ground

Two lives are now ending,
As their souls are ascending
For their sins, they have atoned,
Now they rest in silent stone
This is my fifth poem for NaPoWriMo, also known as National Poetry Writing Month. The goal is to write one poem a day, for all of April. I've decided to give it a try.
I also have a plan. My idea is to portray my novel The Prophecy of The Forbidden in these thirty poems. I'll do my best to accomplish that for as much as I possibly can.

First off -- I had started this off as another Limerick. The first four lines were done, but I couldn't fit what I still wanted to say in the last line. Therefore, I expanded the last line into another stanza.

I'm not quite as happy as this one, as I have been with the others, but I suppose not everything can be just as good. =)

Also, this is where it will start getting difficult to decipher what exactly is happening, in the plot. Cookies to anyone who can figure it out. :aww:

As always, comments and critiques are greatly appreciated. :heart:

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