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all together, now--
i.
Like hands outstretched, like jutted shoulder blades, like a dandelion swept away by the wind.
She is sure she, too, is gone.
ii.
You are beautiful, he whispers, as if it is supposed to be some sort of consolation that he is exhaling promises and empty compliments, things reminiscent of what left long ago.
iii.
The battered Converse by the door. She slips them on and leaves at sunrise, in the wake of his snoring that she is trying not to hear. She's not away for long, he's not even awake when she returns, and yet she gets the feeling this is the furthest she's ever been.
iv.
I'm not here right now, she says quietly against the
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raise a family with a stranger
let's grow each other together.
we'll adopt twenty-six kids: one
for each letter of the alphabet.
the first thirteen will be girls;
the last thirteen will be boys.
we'll neither give them middle names,
nor use uppercase letters. and they'd
be ours.
leslie and oliver and victor and ellen
would be quadruplets; they'd form
hearts with their hands and smile
with their eyes closed. they'd be
our favourites, but we wouldn't
tell them that. we wouldn't tell
them that, but they'd still know.
sure, we'd go bankrupt. sure, we'd
go insane. sure, we'd go everywhere
at all hours at all ages but at least we
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psychosomatic demons.
/inhale and exhale. listen for the rise and fall of your abdomen, because it might be the last thing you ever feel./
it begins when you feel the fire warm across the expanse of your back. in an attempt to extinguish it, you twist and turn, falling onto a heap on the floor and arching in ridiculous angles in order to scrabble at the seemingly raw skin. you give up when your joints begin to protest, and the fire happily proceeds to eat through the rest of you. oh, you're so beautiful, it says, words as slick as ice, and it cools down the burnt skin so well. the glint of the mirror catches your eye, and you take in the sinister air, the inky fl
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Here is another six word story, to hopefully keep all of you satisfied. I'm busy with school, so I don't have a lot of time to focus on writing longer pieces, at the moment.
A lot of thought went into this one, to be honest and I'm curious as to what all of you think.
Comments are greatly appreciated.
(C) *Magic-fan
A lot of thought went into this one, to be honest and I'm curious as to what all of you think.
Comments are greatly appreciated.
(C) *Magic-fan
© 2010 - 2024 Magic-fan
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This is very true, because people usually don't have real enemies that have not had alot of past experience and issues, and lies between eachother.. It is very sad though, why can't we all just learn to be decent and not lie and hurt? It is humanm nature in ways, I know.. It's just painful, Lying is very sad, even feeling the need to is. I really like this piece, simple, direct, beautiful, and to the point. Since I need 20 more words: I really enjoy your works, you have alot of talent. I hope your day goes well. thank you.