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And here is number 25 of my 100 Themes Challenge!
Once again, I like how it came out 8D Lust, what is it? Why do people allow it to take control? This will probably be the last thing I post before I leave tomorrow, sorry T_T I will return Thursday evening 8D And I will check my messages every day ^.^ Hope you enjoy! © Me Xx Natasha Comments
Without lust, people would indeed not be fully attracted to each other.
With this poem I was trying to look at it from a different perspective though. As, like with many things in life, I believe lust to have multiple sides to it. Xx Natasha -- - I am a Prose Admin for *DailyLitDeviations -- "And as I looked-up to the sky seeking guidance, another angel was shot down by human greed." Since you and the previous commentor have prettymuch already gone over everything I had in mind...
I like the perspective you wrote it from, and you simply just have a way with words, I wouldn't know what else to say ^^. -- Data: "Throughout the ages, from Keats to Jorkemo, poets have composed odes to individuals who have had a profound effect upon their lives. In keeping with that tradition, I have written my next poem in honour of my cat." lol xD Awww, sorry
I'm glad you liked the perspective. Thanks so much Xx Natasha -- - I am a Prose Admin for *DailyLitDeviations The rhyming fits so well in this piece.
I like the flow and the rhythm. The way you've described it is quite intriguing and ... true, somewhat. -- #ProjectComment | #Xpose-it | #alwaysmotivated |
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