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And here is number 25 of my 100 Themes Challenge! =)
Once again, I like how it came out 8D

Lust, what is it? Why do people allow it to take control?

This will probably be the last thing I post before I leave tomorrow, sorry T_T
I will return Thursday evening 8D
And I will check my messages every day ^.^

Hope you enjoy! :heart:

© Me

Xx Natasha

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:iconkmeljora-sintaro:
Lust is nothing more than the raw instinct that promotes procreation, yet it is an integral part of who we are and true love cannot be complete without a hint of lust.

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"And as I looked-up to the sky seeking guidance, another angel was shot down by human greed."
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Without lust, people would indeed not be fully attracted to each other.

With this poem I was trying to look at it from a different perspective though. As, like with many things in life, I believe lust to have multiple sides to it.

Xx Natasha

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:iconkmeljora-sintaro:
:) and a wise one you are to believe that for all things in life have multiple sides to them and truth lies in being able to see life through all perspectives possible and determining that which remains true throughout all point of views.

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"And as I looked-up to the sky seeking guidance, another angel was shot down by human greed."
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^^
That's exactly how I think.

Xx Natasha

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:iconnakaya:
Since you and the previous commentor have prettymuch already gone over everything I had in mind... :XD:.
I like the perspective you wrote it from, and you simply just have a way with words, I wouldn't know what else to say ^^.


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Data: "Throughout the ages, from Keats to Jorkemo, poets have composed odes to individuals who have had a profound effect upon their lives. In keeping with that tradition, I have written my next poem in honour of my cat."
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lol xD Awww, sorry :P
I'm glad you liked the perspective.
Thanks so much :heart:

Xx Natasha

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:icon3wyl:
The rhyming fits so well in this piece. :D

I like the flow and the rhythm. The way you've described it is quite intriguing and ... true, somewhat. ^^;

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I'm glad you like it :heart:
It is, isn't it? :P

Xx Natasha

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:iconwendehjoey16:
ooh that's a really good poem and so true for some people although i hope i'm not going to turn out like that lol

:) niche one :thumbsup:

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